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The Crucial Difference
Gaining admission to a top university or grad‐school program requires more than just strong grades and test scores. Demonstrated critical thinking and communication skills are just as important. That's why your admissions essays can make the crucial difference between acceptance and rejection.
I'm a professional admissions essay editor, and I'll help you make the strongest possible case for your admission, with clear, concise, powerful essays. I have more than 20 years of experience helping college and grad school applicants gain admission to top programs. I can help improve your chances significantly by:
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- Highlighting your qualifications to demonstrate what makes you an attractive candidate for next year's entering class
- Enhancing the clarity and readability of your essays by making stronger word choices and rewriting phrases, sentences, and paragraphs
- Improving the logical organization of your material
- Minimizing the impact of negative elements in your background
- Eliminating extraneous detail, to show the admissions committee that you're a focused, clear-thinking candidate
- Ensuring flawless punctuation and grammar
Use the "reply" button above to email me one of your drafts as a file attachment. I will edit a brief sample at no charge to show you what I can do for you. I recommend that you also ask for a sample edit from the other editors you're considering; it's the only way to make sure they can deliver what they claim. I will also quote the exact fee before work begins: no surprises.
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Go to this link—www.davebolick.com/academic/admissionsessays.pdf—for more information, or call me at 510-601-9554.
I've helped hundreds of applicants gain admission to leading graduate and professional programs, in addition to numerous high-quality second-tier programs. I can help you improve your chances of admission to a top MBA, LAW, MED, Pharm D, or any other program. I have the expertise needed to craft strong essays and statements of purpose regardless of program type, greatly enhancing your chances of success. Send me your draft for a free, no-obligation sample edit.
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Call or write to learn more about how I can help you improve your chances of admission to the program of your choice.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Dave Bolick, admissions consultant
This year, every top program will receive thousands of applications for a limited number of spaces. Your admissions essays are your last best chance to convince them to give one of those valuable spaces to you. Make the most of the opportunity—call or email me to learn more.
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